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PostSubject: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Thu Jul 30, 2015 3:01 pm

Kurōn Shindan (Clone Diagnosis)

Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique is designed to utilize the most gentle of chakra dispersions into the patient or corpse – that pulse through the patient and then out naturally through the pores, reforming a model of the patient beside that the Medical Nin can use to diagnose various afflictions, from slight scrapes on the shin, to issues within the arteries of the heart and internal bleeding to showing the internal workings of the body from the patient’s affinities to bloodline releases such as doujutsu able to emulate the basic activation in a safe manner. It takes its bases from classical techniques such as clone and other in order to work properly, and maintains its shape for a long period of time. This permits the Medical Shinobi to see literally what is going on within their patient, diagnosing the result with aid of colored chakra and helping understand the inner workings of the body.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4
Effect: ???
Notes: Out of Combat Only.

Its got a heavy sort of RP vibe. So i didnt know if adding anything to it. Baseline Jutsu. Bump its rank up down whatever. If theres anything left a +Healing would be gorgeous otherwise don't care.

Iryō Damī (Medical Dummy)

Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique forms a convincing interactive model of a patient or corpse beside that the Medical Nin can use to set various afflictions, from slight scrapes on the shin, to issues within the arteries of the heart and internal bleeding to showing the internal workings of the body from the patient’s affinities to bloodline releases such as doujutsu able to practise Medicial Ninjutsu in a safe manner. It takes its bases from classical techniques such as clone and other in order to work properly, and maintains its shape for a long period of time. This permits the Medical Shinobi to see literally what is going on within their patient as they treat them and the effect of their ninjutsu, diagnosing the result with aid of colored chakra and helping understand the inner workings of the body.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4
Effect: Dummy has 2 HP 2 CP.
Notes: Out of Combat Only. This Jutsu can be paired with Kuron Shindan to create a safe clone to test cures.

I wouldnt know what to put for this.. Again, baseline.


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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Sun Aug 02, 2015 11:21 am

Why not make the medical dummy an item? I'm not seeing it as a Jutsu, it would actually require alot to make something as complex as that, which interacts like a person, etc. etc. As a jutsu.

Same with Clone Diagnosis, it seems alot more complex than a C-rank
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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Sun Aug 02, 2015 1:59 pm

It would likely have to be a B-rank jutsu in order to make a shadow/sand/etc clone of another person with the same injuries to begin with, then a C-rank or something in order to diagnose things... obviously the dummy would not be able to copy the person's chakra system, since they aren't being made from the chakra of the person who is being cloned- which also means no cloning kekkei genkai/etc. It's pretty notable that if the person in question is poisoned or currently in the process dying (not stabilized), it'd also damage the dummy since it has practically no health and it'd disappear. Trying to think of a way to do this.
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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Sun Aug 02, 2015 3:31 pm

its even more in depth than that. A persons body holds the secrets of their Jutsu. To copy that is something time consuming research heavy and complex. It's probably easier to make this an item and maybe use a jutsu to outline anything foreign or different than a standard body is supposed to be functioning.
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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Thu Aug 06, 2015 12:30 am

What if the clone only copy basic non genetic information ..Or whatever... Like it only copied over the basic stuff not the secret stuff ? Body , bone structure , simulated their orgrans and any damage done but at this level it couldnt be used to get "Bloodline" or genetic type information ..Then a a or B rank allowed more indepth?
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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Mon Aug 10, 2015 2:42 am

Gonna rework this tomorrow with new idea.

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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Wed Aug 12, 2015 11:27 pm

//New versiones, with two additions.

Kurōn Shindan (Clone Diagnosis)
Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique is designed to utilize the most gentle of chakra dispersions into the patient or corpse – that pulse through the patient and then out naturally through the pores along with the patient’s chakra, changing the Iryo Dami that the Medical Nin created to match the basic form of the user. Can use to diagnose various afflictions, from slight scrapes on the shin, to issues within the arteries of the heart and internal bleeding to showing the internal workings of the body in comparison to the normal human state created by the Iryo Dami permits the Medical Shinobi to see literally what is going on within their patient, diagnosing the result with aid of colored chakra and helping understand the inner workings of the body in comparison.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 + Iryo Dami Cost.
Effect: ???
Notes: Out of Combat Only. Must be used with Iryo Dami.

Iryō Damī (Medical Dummy)
Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique forms a convincing interactive model of the human body, enabling for safe practise of Medical Techniques. Although it can convincingly reproduce the working human body, it keeps a stasis form, enabling the user to set the illness or affliction and keep it at that point. From there the Dummy is only responsive to cures and medical ninjutsu of any sort, until openly acted upon without being set.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: Dummy has 2 HP 2 CP.
Notes: Out of Combat Only. This Jutsu can be paired with Kuron Shindan to create a safe twin clone to diagnose differences and anomalies in body. Using this with Kuron Shindan creates a stasis version of the illness or effect.

Torigā Han'nō (Trigger Reaction)

One of Akane’s analytical Medical Ninjutsu, the Torigā Han'nō is designed to trigger a reaction within the target’s body, creating a disruption in the chakra system that can force bloodline limits and elemental affinities to activate or react in response to the touch. It is not necessarily a gentle medical technique by any means but activates doujutsu, kekkei tota, kekkei genkai and the like making it easier to understand the chakra systems’ workings. This technique can be unpleasant at times.

Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: N/A
Notes: This can trigger harmful effects but never to the fullest extent, if there is more than one applicable effect to be had, they trigger in a clear and delayed reaction as it courses through the body.

[Wind Specialities are DoT/Duration]

Biting Wind

Unlike most traditional wind techniques the chakra is expelled into the air through the breath and then dispersed outward before the handseals – the chakra imbued winds forming together and taking a sharp sudden nature that encircles the target passing the target repeatedly with its by more and more with debris, shrapnel floating in it’s wake leaving jagged and painful edges.
Type/Rank: C-Rank – Wind Ninjutsu (WIS)
Effect: ½ (Base DMG+1d3) for 1d4+1 Rounds
Breakdown: DoT [ Free, Specialty 1d2+1 Duration], HP DMG [1d2, 2 JP], Duration [Specialty, 1d2, 2 JP]

Lesser Water’s Edge

Unlike most traditional techniques, the Water’s Edge is a Suiton technique that works similar to most enhancement jutsu, enhancing an existing feature by coating the edge with water that moves along the edge at a speed that can utterly cut through wood easily without so much as touching the blade.

Type/Rank: D-Rank – Water Kenjutsu/Taijutsu
Effect: +1d3 HP DMG

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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Thu Aug 13, 2015 12:47 am

Roleplay wise i have an issue with this roleplay jutsu.

Torigā Han'nō (Trigger Reaction)

One of Akane’s analytical Medical Ninjutsu, the Torigā Han'nō is designed to trigger a reaction within the target’s body, creating a disruption in the chakra system that can force bloodline limits and elemental affinities to activate or react in response to the touch. It is not necessarily a gentle medical technique by any means but activates doujutsu, kekkei tota, kekkei genkai and the like making it easier to understand the chakra systems’ workings. This technique can be unpleasant at times.

Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: N/A
Notes: This can trigger harmful effects but never to the fullest extent, if there is more than one applicable effect to be had, they trigger in a clear and delayed reaction as it courses through the body.


Each bloodline limit can take different ammounts of different emotional stress or other emotional states to activate, i am open to allowing it to activate ACN's and Kekkei Tota's aswell as base elements but i do not think it should be able to activate certain aspects like Doujutsu or other Kekkei Genkai that can effect the body in ways other than access to advanced affinitys.
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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Thu Aug 13, 2015 2:20 am

Sarada Uchiha wrote:
//New versiones, with two additions.

Kurōn Shindan (Clone Diagnosis)
Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique is designed to utilize the most gentle of chakra dispersions into the patient or corpse – that pulse through the patient and then out naturally through the pores along with the patient’s chakra, changing the Iryo Dami that the Medical Nin created to match the basic form of the user. Can use to diagnose various afflictions, from slight scrapes on the shin, to issues within the arteries of the heart and internal bleeding to showing the internal workings of the body in comparison to the normal human state created by the Iryo Dami permits the Medical Shinobi to see literally what is going on within their patient, diagnosing the result with aid of colored chakra and helping understand the inner workings of the body in comparison.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 + Iryo Dami Cost.
Effect: User gains +1D5 to their next healing roll. Lasts for one use.
Notes: Out of Combat Only. Must be used with Iryo Dami.


Iryō Damī (Medical Dummy)
Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique forms a convincing interactive model of the human body, enabling for safe practise of Medical Techniques. Although it can convincingly reproduce the working human body, it keeps a stasis form, enabling the user to set the illness or affliction and keep it at that point. From there the Dummy is only responsive to cures and medical ninjutsu of any sort, until openly acted upon without being set.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: Dummy has 2 HP 2 CP.
Training Effect: Caster may give 1LP (from their pool) to their student for the training session. This LP must be present in the teacher to be usable
Notes: Out of Combat Only. This Jutsu can be paired with Kuron Shindan to create a safe twin clone to diagnose differences and anomalies in body. Using this with Kuron Shindan creates a stasis version of the illness or effect.

Torigā Han'nō (Trigger Reaction)

One of Akane’s analytical Medical Ninjutsu, the Torigā Han'nō is designed to trigger a reaction within the target’s body, creating a disruption in the chakra system that can force bloodline limits and elemental affinities to activate or react in response to the touch. It is not necessarily a gentle medical technique by any means but activates doujutsu, kekkei tota, kekkei genkai and the like making it easier to understand the chakra systems’ workings. This technique can be unpleasant at times.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: N/A
Notes: This can trigger harmful effects but never to the fullest extent, if there is more than one applicable effect to be had, they trigger in a clear and delayed reaction as it courses through the body.
Disclaimer: This technique is NOT permitted to awaken bloodlines. The purpose of the technique is to make the individual display already occurring

[Wind Specialities are DoT/Duration]

Biting Wind

Unlike most traditional wind techniques the chakra is expelled into the air through the breath and then dispersed outward before the handseals – the chakra imbued winds forming together and taking a sharp sudden nature that encircles the target passing the target repeatedly with its by more and more with debris, shrapnel floating in it’s wake leaving jagged and painful edges.
Type/Rank: C-Rank – Wind Ninjutsu (WIS)
Effect: (Base DMG+1d3)/2 for 1d4+1 Rounds
Breakdown: DoT [ Free, Specialty 1d2+1 Duration], HP DMG ]+1d3, 3 JP], Duration [Specialty, 1d2, 2 JP]

Making the wording more clear; You will need to add an inverse or lower damage by 1 in order to make this balanced.

Lesser Water’s Edge
Unlike most traditional techniques, the Water’s Edge is a Suiton technique that works similar to most enhancement jutsu, enhancing an existing feature  by coating the edge with water that moves along the edge at a speed that can utterly cut through wood easily without so much as touching the blade.
Type/Rank: D-Rank – Water Kenjutsu/Taijutsu
Effect: +1d2 HP DMG to Water Kenjutsu/Taijutsu for 1 Round

Isn't an attack; unless that's what you wanted. Due to it not being an attack it doesn't receive non-damaging bonus.

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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Sat Aug 15, 2015 4:04 am

Bump, sleepy re-look at techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Akane Jikodo Jutsu - Awaiting Mechanic/RP Response   Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:34 am

Isobu wrote:
Sarada Uchiha wrote:
//New versiones, with two additions.

Kurōn Shindan (Clone Diagnosis)
Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique is designed to utilize the most gentle of chakra dispersions into the patient or corpse – that pulse through the patient and then out naturally through the pores along with the patient’s chakra, changing the Iryo Mokei that the Medical Nin created to match the basic form of the user. Can use to diagnose various afflictions, from slight scrapes on the shin, to issues within the arteries of the heart and internal bleeding to showing the internal workings of the body in comparison to the normal human state created by the Iryo Mokei permits the Medical Shinobi to see literally what is going on within their patient, diagnosing the result with aid of colored chakra and helping understand the inner workings of the body in comparison.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 + Iryo Mokei Cost.
Effect: User gains +1D5 to their next healing roll within one minute.
Notes: Out of Combat Only. Must be used with Iryo Dami.


Iryō Mokei (Medical Dummy)
Created by Akane in the field of normal Medical Ninjutsu, this technique forms a convincing interactive model of the human body, enabling for safe practise of Medical Techniques. Although it can convincingly reproduce the working human body, it keeps a stasis form, enabling the user to set the illness or affliction and keep it at that point. From there the Dummy is only responsive to cures and medical ninjutsu of any sort, until openly acted upon without being set.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: Dummy has 2 HP 2 CP.
Training Effect: Caster may give 1 Heaven Point (from their pool) to their student for the training session. This LP must be present in the teacher to be usable
Notes: Out of Combat Only. This Jutsu can be paired with Kuron Shindan to create a safe twin clone to diagnose differences and anomalies in body. Using this with Kuron Shindan creates a stasis version of the illness or effect.

Torigā Han'nō (Trigger Reaction)

One of Akane’s analytical Medical Ninjutsu, the Torigā Han'nō is designed to trigger a reaction within the target’s body, creating a disruption in the chakra system that can force bloodline limits and elemental affinities to activate or react in response to the touch. It is not necessarily a gentle medical technique by any means but activates doujutsu, kekkei tota, kekkei genkai and the like making it easier to understand the chakra systems’ workings. This technique can be unpleasant at times.
Type/Rank: Medical Ninjutsu – C (Wis)
Cost: 4 CP
Effect: N/A
Notes: This can trigger harmful effects but never to the fullest extent, if there is more than one applicable effect to be had, they trigger in a clear and delayed reaction as it courses through the body.
Disclaimer: This technique is NOT permitted to awaken bloodlines. The purpose of the technique is to make the individual display already occurring

[Wind Specialities are DoT/Duration]

Chikurikaze (Biting Wind)

Unlike most traditional wind techniques the chakra is expelled into the air through the breath and then dispersed outward before the handseals – the chakra imbued winds forming together and taking a sharp sudden nature that encircles the target passing the target repeatedly with its by more and more with debris, shrapnel floating in it’s wake leaving jagged and painful edges.
Type/Rank: C-Rank – Wind Ninjutsu (WIS)
Effect: (Rank DMG+1d2)/2 for 1d4+1 Rounds
Breakdown: DoT [ Free, Specialty 1d2+1 Duration], HP DMG +1d2, 2 JP, Duration [Specialty, 1d2, 2 JP]




Lesser Water’s Edge
Unlike most traditional techniques, the Water’s Edge is a Suiton technique that works similar to most enhancement jutsu, enhancing an existing feature  by coating the edge with water that moves along the edge at a speed that can utterly cut through wood easily without so much as touching the blade.
Type/Rank: D-Rank – Water Kenjutsu/Taijutsu
Effect: +1d2 HP DMG to Suiton Jutsu for 1 Round



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