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PostSubject: Yumi - the Privateer, Slot and RP 'Revision' / Addendum   Mon Aug 03, 2015 3:02 am

Fixed to meet some chart changes/build to server lore and consistency, and rule changes - Note: I'll be doing the whole full bio thing appearance, etc thing on Yumi's bio for her family but these are the highlights

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Yumi Background:
Family on Mothers Side: Grandmother Katsuki Nohara (Deceased), Grandfather ~ 'Unknown'
Mother: Hina Nohara
Katsuki Nohara, was for all intents and purposes a geisha assassin, working for a guild her art was hardly that of a shinobi but shared similar traits, her daughter was born during a rather long espionage mission with a daimyo, with courtship involved and even marriage, her exposure as a spy did not go over well. Cast out with her daughter Hina (Who may well be the daughter of a daimyo, the cook, or a boarder guard), they were exiled from that land, exposed she was no longer useful to her guild, and set out to life on her own. A horrid reputation to follow, Katsuki had some training with shadow based jutsu, hiding things, and some proficiency with using it for henges and the like. Without focused training it never amounted to much, Hina Nohara her daughter changed her name and moved out her mother falling ill and passing not too long after.

Hina Nohara - AKA Candi
A stripper in the sugar daddy stripclub in tea country, she raised Yumi after a passing dalliance with Yumis father, raising her in what is not exactly a brothel but nearing that line. Yumi saw things she shouldn't have but without a method of formal education, nor place to put her, there wasn't much choice. Yumi's sharingan eyes developed during a more impassioned affair with yet another 'lavishly paid for date', that involved hitting her mother, left her part of Konoha soon after, sharingan belonging to the leaf, and some strong of the matter. Candi for her part is not a very intelligent person, she would have a lot to be sad for but in the end she just goes through the motions, not really thinking about life and where she is going, Yumi cares for her a great deal, but rather realizes her mother lacks much for ambition. Her mother however is ever a pragmatic person, who rarely if ever complains about her lot in life.

Fathers Side:
Grandmother: Unknown to Yumi
Grandfather: Gin Uchiha
Gin Uchiha made his life as a pirate, still about the village he is quite elderly now, talking stories about the good old days of piracy before the Uchiha founded Konoha, and him more or less 'press ganged' into position of the village. Early on he made a name for himself for getting the job done, if a bit haphazardly; one day he came to the village announcing he had a son, with no reference to who the mother was, that son developed sharingan too so there wasn't much to question. With sharingan eyes, he plundered, stole, and made his way to a high place in the clan.
For all of it Gin is a terrible person, who kills, plunders, and cares more about worldly things then anything else. He takes pride in his son but in a way that marks what Shinta does as his own. This leaves the relationship strained but manageable, the apple didn't fall far from the tree after all, neither he nor Shinta are one to hold a grudge when other interests are on the line, an insight Yumi has learned but does not always employ.
Father: Shinta Uchiha managed to keep his nose clean most of his life, interest in women getting the better from him, he had made it most of his career managing sanctioned action. ONE NIGHT! Just one, and he knocks up a stripper. He could of been clan head, he could of been famous in his own way, but just when such things were being discussed a messenger comes announcing that he was the father of an illegitimate daughter who well they'd LOVE to deny it, has sharingan eyes and must be dealt with. The shame fell entirely on Shinta, as it rather should, people were dispatched the sharingan using daughter recovered to the village, Shinta's reputation was in tatters there was nothing to hide, he knocked up a stripper, there's this kid with sharingan and all his life's work lies in tatter, still a jounin but just that, over one well timed mistake coming to life.
And he told Yumi so, again. And again. And again. Lightening up when talking about his exploits, and his own father stepping in to give "advice" Yumi took well to the tales, but in the end their relationship is strained, he blames her for all his problems including no longer being an ever so eligible bachelor, and his position in the clan. Yumi blames him for forcing her to become a ninja, treating her like scum on his boot at times, the occasional lewd glance, and being ever so judgmental.


.:: PAST ::.
Born to Shinta Uchiha and "Candi" a stripper from tea country, Yumi was not even part of the Uchiha Clan from an early age. Strictly speaking she was raised by her mother, after her father accidentally knocked her mother up after a drunken party, when he was slacking off during one of his missions. Her mother not the sharpest tool in the shed, taught her from a young age to basically, just schmooze people to get what she wanted. After presenting with Sharingan however things became a bit difficult, it wasn't too long before ten year old Yumi, was separated from her mother who told her to write, but forgot to ever explain what an address was. Needlessly to say Yumi wrote a lot, but didn't know much about who she was writing to, eventually realizing her letters weren't actually going anywhere. Her presence in the clan comes off a bit of an annoyance taught by her father she hadn't really met that often before, she learned the way of the Uchiha and of Ninja, trying to perfect what arts she could, her father explaining how nice it is to have money from missions and the finer points of piracy (his own former profession and his fathers) and burglary (his present profession for the village). Needless to say Yumi turned out mostly as a self centered ditz whose presence of the doton element drove her into the medical field just so she didn't further distance herself too soon from the rest of the clan who enjoyed the flame their blood provides.
Yumi's past lends herself to a certain type of person, and she failed to rise above it, back talking people, saying horrible things, going from one thing to another, she kind of likes it, because it reminds her of 'home'.

.:: ACADEMY ::.
Academy: Bloody oldest kid in the room, she got by quickly, but dreaded every moment of it only slightly less then the far more grueling exercises of the Uchicha to get her up to speed and ensure her loyalty. She didn't make much for friends, often getting called '######' and 'schmuck face' on the account of her constantly looking just a bit like a schmuck in class. Puberty however was kind enough to her, and she grew out of her schmuckfacedness. In the end though her opinion of academy students suffers, and well much of it is just the hate and terrible things she comes back to bite her, some of it is also the normal genuine cruelty of others. She holds a number of grudges.

.:: GENIN ::.
Genin: After becoming a genin her real arts came to life, practicing medical ninjutsu she hopes to use other people as repairable human shields to accomplish all things, and master the arts of talking her way out of dangerous missions, and into such fashionable positions as, overly paid daimyo guard, and hander outter of ninja missions at the hokage's office. Her sheer fear of dying horribly in combat drives her to excel at the medical profession, indeed the constant threat of possibly being stabbed to death if she should ever fail... has driven her to the point of becoming a medical prodigy. Most of her missions are only about the money, and often not being quite up to the task of committing the atrocities genin are desired to commit in leaf.
Not too far into genin life, the Hokage A'nai, removed her from active duty to pursue her missing eye maybe, or just petty politics, whatever the reason theres a paper trail that doesn't make sense in itself and reading between the lines speaks to something distinctly different. The next hokage came up and put her into position, as a uchiha. She finds life as a genin dis-pleasurable, she found freedom again and lost it, she tried for chuunin doing what she understood she was supposed to and failed.  She holds a number of grudges.

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Blood Line Limit: 万物創造, Banbutsu Sōzō (Creation of all things)
Members of the Uchiha clan are not considered adults until they can full express certain fire techniques, well some may view it as the clans special bloodright, others would note the deviation from the sage of sight from which they are said to hail, and the two ancestors before that. But such is not the case for all their progeny, as pieces and parts of the sage ancestors live throughout the world, in the lowest family of despots who marry freely, have children freely, bloodlines also flow freely, and back again, in Yumi's case, the sages heritage kept through Uchiha incest (to maintain the sharingan), and different blood echoing of the past recreates something lost. Through twisted Heritage Yumi Uchiha, rekindles some of those first, long lost arts.
Through Yumi's eyes, comes light, through her heart comes the darkness within of the shadow element, befitting Yumi's twisted little heart and light that is her 'special' eyes that often cast as shadow when they fall upon others, even Yumi. Cloaking things in mystery and deception making life truly strange and bizarre in its wake, twisting forms, shifting shapes in what should only be darkness. The twisting shadows have no extraordinary basis other then odd heritage her mother who would also express such a release were she to become a shinobi, however with both light and shadow together the elements form together and create a third release 'creation of all things' light and shadow creating form and substance from nothing, the sages art that would not manifest without both elements. Bound together with knowledge of the bodies inner working its a careful art that requires precision and practice. Yumi can only use Banbutsu Sōzō to restore bodies and flesh, she doesn't have complete mastery of it or the ability to go further with it without kinjutsu.
Base (1 Power points): Medical Ninjutsu
Upgrade I:  Gain Access to Shadow Element (HP Damage + Vamp HP) Free E rank, Gain access to "Banbutsu Sōzō" (HoT, and +Healing)  (Free E rank)

Quote :
Far Sight
The Uchiha are infamous for their exceptionally talented and battle-orientated shinobi, but Yumi wasn't really raised among them well many train deeply into the arts of hand-to-hand, weaponry and tools to compliment their ninjutsu arts - Yumi could of done all these things sadly or beneficially her interests lie elsewhere, instead her twisted desires and purely the way she was raised along with her eyes takes her down the path of secrets. Yumi has the abilities pervert, whenever she (and not even people who steal her eyes~ having not the talent) makes use of sharingan she can see further into the distance, past physical barriers, with a higher focus than average, seeing things in the distance in relatively high detail experiencing sights and sounds as if she were there physically; bringing special meaning to "eye that reflects the heart" (心を写す瞳, Kokoro o utsusu hitomi). But would be blocked by anything designed to defeat doujutsu in such a manner, with the prevalence of byakugan the perverted eye is often similarly foiled, even if no one knows of its existence, and was planning for one of the numerous different special eyes and scrying techniques.
Base I:  +1 Area Detection Range - Light Element aka Far-Seeing (Specialties: Detection (Rare) & Negatives (Common))
Upgrade I:  +2 Area Detection Range - +1 Physical Detection.
Upgrade II: +3 Area Detection Range - +1 Chakra Detect.
Note: She can actually see and hear those she detects, and those who aren't hiding / things there, and can "see" HP and CP in character (accessing chakra levels and physical condition)

Bloodline Limit: Sharingan~写輪眼 ('Mirror/Copy Wheel Eye')
The Dojutsu of the Uchiha clan, said to be a cousin of the Byakugan and the Tōchōgan. Each user's abilities with the eye are unique as it grows from single tomoe to it's mature three tomoe forms, then onto Mangekyo, fickle blood lost to time, and the weight of experience defining the call of doujutsu. Through simple fate Yumi Uchiha developed sharingan from her loose mother from tea, and playboy father from Konoha. Her eyes see through the darkness and onwards into the light, creating form and function and mirror what she sees and what she should not see, her heart, and the world around her.
Sharingan manifests a certain eternal sharp view of reality, for Yumi this translates to an ability to see past genjutsu or force her actions past petty binding. By sheer force of her special eyes she pushes past the bindings of genjutsu, or the physical sort of things, to act in reality When it comes to things truly physical her sharingan reflects her true state to act in spite of such troubles, the self delusion enough to force jutsu and the like even in binding as chakra focuses itself just the same.
Doujutsu - Base I (2PP): Gain Access to Doujutsu (Free E, D, C rank)
Upgrade II Duel Slot (1 PP Duel): May act while stunned whether it be physical or mental for 5 cp.
Kekkai Tota: Main - Doujutsu, + light, + shadow
Note: 'Dojutsu' counts as a custom element. It's Specialties are Duration, Bonus Rolls, and Negatives
Note: Using the jutsu given by this slot will activate the Sharingan.

Sharingan - Pirates Eyes
Yumi's Sharingan allows her to copy the jutsu she sees for later practice, even her eyes are fully committed to the pirates life style of greed, looking from afar she copies what she sees intricately often as if in slow motion, allowing her to read lips as if she were there to hear them even when she can't hear at all. Naturally just seeing how somethings done doesn't necessarily translate to direct talent and many jutsu will take practice often at a later date. This art also connects with a special set of jutsu based specifically around the fine art of cheating.
Effect: Store jutsu up to 3 days to self-teach later on (via forum post/creator watching/DM witness), if training begins it can be completed regularly like any other jutsu after the minimum requirement is reached. Requires permission for custom techniques. - Allows the creation of "Piracy" doujutsu element starting with one E rank.
Note: Allows lip reading.
Base II: Gain Piracy Element (Specializations DoT/Duration), 1xE Rank Jutsu. Gain Storage
Note: Store Jutsu up to 3 days to self-teach later on (via forum post/creator watching/DM witness), if training begins it can be completed regularly like any other jutsu after the minimum requirement is reached.
Note: Requires creators permission for customs
Note: Requires matching Element and specialties

Quote :
Crystal Release:
A combination of light and earth, joining together to create purple and indigo hued crystals. Crystal release sharpens Yumi's chakra to a razors edge, making all her ninjutsu that much more deadly due to the nature of her chakra at rest already being rather ordered, if haphazardly so. The advanced chakra nature mostly focuses on the creation of chakra imbued crystals and their implementation. The ability further extends to crystallize some other chakra with special techniques
Duel Slot: Increased Ninjutsu Critical Range +3 (1x round) (17-20), Crystal Element 1 free E rank, (Specialties: HP DR Ignore, Negative Removal)
Note: Light Main.

Quote :
~Traditional Style Fuuinjutsu and Seals~
Fuuinjutsu/Fuinjutsu Element
Sealing Jutsu comes in many varieties and forms for Yumi, she does so in the classical style with very few exceptions, pre-drawn seals on her body and parchments and the like, are released, rather then creating seals on the spot. The fine art depends on specifically drawn patterns, and using chakra created, or chakra infused ink to perform its various tasks. Where some ninja might use something on the spot Yumi's style is one of careful concentrated preparation. It works on all manner of things rocks, people so on, drawing seals and infusing them with proper chakra in measured way to produce effects. Even keeping books and papers with ready made seals to apply or harness chakra.
Yumi has also used this to develop body bound seals, be they purely jutsu based, or something more substantial. A chakra seal located on her lower back links into her chakra network, condensing it, pressuring it focusing it, and ensure her body, mind, and soul maintain a certain balance. This constant flow of fuinjutsu also pushes into other aspects of her nature, chakra having more of a tendency to bind together accelerating to creation of elements, such as her crystal release and creation of all things. The seal itself references body in unison with the mind and soul, through representations that are seemingly abstract and chakra imbued in themselves
A secondary seal along her right hand, is created more for battle, a twisting abstract seal of twisting and breaking forms that link into other forms shaped similar to vines or flowers, its somewhat beautiful like flowing water when she uses jutsu, as it reinforces and spreads its nature allowing for her to split the jutsu she casts as she creates them the fuinjutsu drawing it in and then releasing it as she casts where there should be one, there are sometimes two or three.
Base: Fuuinjutsu Unleashed & Fuunijutsu Binding Ways/Script
Duel Slot (Two Separate Elements): (1 Free E rank for Each)
Specializations -
Unleashed: Damage (Common) & CP Costs (Rare)
Fuuinjutsu Binding Ways/Script: HP DR (Common) & CP Costs (Rare)

Fuuinjutsu Seal - Chakra
Base (3 pp): 1 CP Regen
Legendary (+1pp): 2 CP regeneration

Fuuinjutsu Seal - Prism
Base: +0 additional targets with Ninjutsu
Upgrade I: +1 additional targets with Ninjutsu
Upgrade II: +2 additional targets with Ninjutsu


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PostSubject: Re: Yumi - the Privateer, Slot and RP 'Revision' / Addendum   Wed Aug 12, 2015 2:26 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi - the Privateer, Slot and RP 'Revision' / Addendum   Thu Aug 13, 2015 12:20 pm

References:
http://naruto-verse.forumotion.com/t6478-slot-request-yumi-acn
http://naruto-verse.forumotion.com/t6441-revisionz-for-yumi
http://naruto-verse.forumotion.com/t6232-yumi-full-build

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Blood Line Limit: 万物創造, Banbutsu Sōzō (Creation of all things)
   Members of the Uchiha clan are not considered adults until they can full express certain fire techniques, well some may view it as the clans special bloodright, others would note the deviation from the sage of sight from which they are said to hail, and the two ancestors before that. But such is not the case for all their progeny, as pieces and parts of the sage ancestors live throughout the world, in the lowest family of despots who marry freely, have children freely, bloodlines also flow freely, and back again, in Yumi's case, the sages heritage kept through Uchiha incest (to maintain the sharingan), and different blood echoing of the past recreates something lost. Through twisted Heritage Yumi Uchiha, rekindles some of those first, long lost arts.
   Through Yumi's eyes, comes light, through her heart comes the darkness within of the shadow element, befitting Yumi's twisted little heart and light that is her 'special' eyes that often cast as shadow when they fall upon others, even Yumi. Cloaking things in mystery and deception making life truly strange and bizarre in its wake, twisting forms, shifting shapes in what should only be darkness. The twisting shadows have no extraordinary basis other then odd heritage her mother who would also express such a release were she to become a shinobi, however with both light and shadow together the elements form together and create a third release 'creation of all things' light and shadow creating form and substance from nothing, the sages art that would not manifest without both elements. Bound together with knowledge of the bodies inner working its a careful art that requires precision and practice. Yumi can only use Banbutsu Sōzō to restore bodies and flesh, she doesn't have complete mastery of it or the ability to go further with it without kinjutsu.
   Base (1 Power points): Medical Ninjutsu
   Upgrade I:  Gain Access to Shadow Element (HP Damage + Vamp HP) Free E rank, Gain access to "Banbutsu Sōzō" (HoT, and +Healing)  (Free E rank)

HP Damage = Common
Vamp HP = Rare
thus Shadow = Okay

HoT= DoT = Common
+healing = rare
thus Banbutsu Sozo = Okay
1/2 duel slots offer one free E rank.



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   Far Sight
   The Uchiha are infamous for their exceptionally talented and battle-orientated shinobi, but Yumi wasn't really raised among them well many train deeply into the arts of hand-to-hand, weaponry and tools to compliment their ninjutsu arts - Yumi could of done all these things sadly or beneficially her interests lie elsewhere, instead her twisted desires and purely the way she was raised along with her eyes takes her down the path of secrets. Yumi has the abilities pervert, whenever she (and not even people who steal her eyes~ having not the talent) makes use of sharingan she can see further into the distance, past physical barriers, with a higher focus than average, seeing things in the distance in relatively high detail experiencing sights and sounds as if she were there physically; bringing special meaning to "eye that reflects the heart" (心を写す瞳, Kokoro o utsusu hitomi). But would be blocked by anything designed to defeat doujutsu in such a manner, with the prevalence of byakugan the perverted eye is often similarly foiled, even if no one knows of its existence, and was planning for one of the numerous different special eyes and scrying techniques.
   Base I:  +1 Area Detection Range - Light Element aka Far-Seeing (Specialties: Detection (Rare) & Negatives (Common))
   Upgrade I:  +2 Area Detection Range - +1 Physical Detection.
   Upgrade II: +3 Area Detection Range - +1 Chakra Detect.
   Note: She can actually see and hear those she detects, and those who aren't hiding / things there, and can "see" HP and CP in character (accessing chakra levels and physical condition)
Already Approved 2x
Quote :
  Bloodline Limit: Sharingan~写輪眼 ('Mirror/Copy Wheel Eye')
   The Dojutsu of the Uchiha clan, said to be a cousin of the Byakugan and the Tōchōgan. Each user's abilities with the eye are unique as it grows from single tomoe to it's mature three tomoe forms, then onto Mangekyo, fickle blood lost to time, and the weight of experience defining the call of doujutsu. Through simple fate Yumi Uchiha developed sharingan from her loose mother from tea, and playboy father from Konoha. Her eyes see through the darkness and onwards into the light, creating form and function and mirror what she sees and what she should not see, her heart, and the world around her.
   Sharingan manifests a certain eternal sharp view of reality, for Yumi this translates to an ability to see past genjutsu or force her actions past petty binding. By sheer force of her special eyes she pushes past the bindings of genjutsu, or the physical sort of things, to act in reality When it comes to things truly physical her sharingan reflects her true state to act in spite of such troubles, the self delusion enough to force jutsu and the like even in binding as chakra focuses itself just the same.
   Doujutsu - Base I (2PP): Gain Access to Doujutsu (Free E, D, C rank)
   Upgrade II Duel Slot (1 PP Duel): May act while stunned whether it be physical or mental for 5 cp.
   Kekkai Tota: Main - Doujutsu, + light, + shadow
   Note: 'Dojutsu' counts as a custom element. It's Specialties are Duration, Bonus Rolls, and Negatives
   Note: Using the jutsu given by this slot will activate the Sharingan.

   Was approved before, better Kekkai Tota setting (Main element with light and shadow listed as secondary)
1/2 duel slots also approved off chart
Quote :
Sharingan - Pirates Eyes
   Yumi's Sharingan allows her to copy the jutsu she sees for later practice, even her eyes are fully committed to the pirates life style of greed, looking from afar she copies what she sees intricately often as if in slow motion, allowing her to read lips as if she were there to hear them even when she can't hear at all. Naturally just seeing how somethings done doesn't necessarily translate to direct talent and many jutsu will take practice often at a later date. This art also connects with a special set of jutsu based specifically around the fine art of cheating.
   Effect: Store jutsu up to 3 days to self-teach later on (via forum post/creator watching/DM witness), if training begins it can be completed regularly like any other jutsu after the minimum requirement is reached. Requires permission for custom techniques. - Allows the creation of "Piracy" doujutsu element starting with one E rank.
   Note: Allows lip reading.
   Base II: Gain Piracy Element (Specializations DoT/Duration), 1xE Rank Jutsu. Gain Storage
   Note: Store Jutsu up to 3 days to self-teach later on (via forum post/creator watching/DM witness), if training begins it can be completed regularly like any other jutsu after the minimum requirement is reached.
   Note: Requires creators permission for customs
   Note: Requires matching Element and specialties
Approved 3x before



 
Quote :
 Crystal Release:
   A combination of light and earth, joining together to create purple and indigo hued crystals. Crystal release sharpens Yumi's chakra to a razors edge, making all her ninjutsu that much more deadly due to the nature of her chakra at rest already being rather ordered, if haphazardly so. The advanced chakra nature mostly focuses on the creation of chakra imbued crystals and their implementation. The ability further extends to crystallize some other chakra with special techniques
   Duel Slot: Increased Ninjutsu Critical Range +3 (1x round) (17-20), Crystal Element 1 free E rank, (Specialties: HP DR Ignore, Negative Removal)
   Note: Light Main.
Recently approved matches chart - specialties changed
HP DR Ignore = Common
Negative Removal = Rare (changed)
Fine to chart, e ranks off chart, ninjutsu critical range 1x round iss off chart and already approved before



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   ~Traditional Style Fuuinjutsu and Seals~
   Fuuinjutsu/Fuinjutsu Element
   Sealing Jutsu comes in many varieties and forms for Yumi, she does so in the classical style with very few exceptions, pre-drawn seals on her body and parchments and the like, are released, rather then creating seals on the spot. The fine art depends on specifically drawn patterns, and using chakra created, or chakra infused ink to perform its various tasks. Where some ninja might use something on the spot Yumi's style is one of careful concentrated preparation. It works on all manner of things rocks, people so on, drawing seals and infusing them with proper chakra in measured way to produce effects. Even keeping books and papers with ready made seals to apply or harness chakra.
   Yumi has also used this to develop body bound seals, be they purely jutsu based, or something more substantial. A chakra seal located on her lower back links into her chakra network, condensing it, pressuring it focusing it, and ensure her body, mind, and soul maintain a certain balance. This constant flow of fuinjutsu also pushes into other aspects of her nature, chakra having more of a tendency to bind together accelerating to creation of elements, such as her crystal release and creation of all things. The seal itself references body in unison with the mind and soul, through representations that are seemingly abstract and chakra imbued in themselves
   A secondary seal along her right hand, is created more for battle, a twisting abstract seal of twisting and breaking forms that link into other forms shaped similar to vines or flowers, its somewhat beautiful like flowing water when she uses jutsu, as it reinforces and spreads its nature allowing for her to split the jutsu she casts as she creates them the fuinjutsu drawing it in and then releasing it as she casts where there should be one, there are sometimes two or three.
   Base: Fuuinjutsu Unleashed & Fuunijutsu Binding Ways/Script
   Duel Slot (Two Separate Elements): (1 Free E rank for Each)
   Specializations -
   Unleashed: Damage (Common) & CP Costs (Rare)
   Fuuinjutsu Binding Ways/Script: HP DR (Common) & CP Costs (Rare)

Two 1/2 duel elements
Unleashed changed
HP Damage = Common,
CP costs = Rare
Element okay

   
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Fuuinjutsu Seal - Chakra
   Base (3 pp): 1 CP Regen
   Legendendary (+1pp): 2 CP regeneration
Directly off chart. Legendary was misspelled changing at top


DF okay?


 
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 Fuuinjutsu Seal - Prism
   Base: +0 additional targets with Ninjutsu
   Upgrade I: +1 additional targets with Ninjutsu
   Upgrade II: +2 additional targets with Ninjutsu
Approved before
Matches Chart


-- most of the DF has already been approved at least once before the only switch out is certain elements it matches current rules.
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