Yumi S rank Genjutsu - Player Input

Uses 1.03 Progression Chart

"Paradise"
Rank - S
Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu - Intelligence
Specialties: Negatives, Duration
CP: 20, 2 round cooldown
The truest vision of heaven through genjutsu, a special paradise that exists only within someones living heart. A truly perfect world whatever that would be, presented within the mind, each moment more perfect then the last, brooks spilling ambrosia, an unsettling delusion that is hard to break free of, lost love ones found, life seeming pointless with ones new found heaven. This genjutsu infiltrates and perverts the mind to being locked truly in a paradise of their own design, outwardly losing track of all life, even after the genjutsu is broken it persists in the users mind making them lose themselves to it, addictive longing to something that never was, the stuff of madness that is difficult to shake, one might even try to seek death to return to that heaven.
DF: Stun and -1d6+1d5+1 to rolls, for 3d6+1d2+3 rounds to all enemies
User loses: Next free action, and next turn.
DC: 30 Charisma to break
JP: 25 + 7 (no rank damage) +1 cool down +5 lose next turn +4 lose next free action
-7 stun 35
-18 universal negative rolls (specialty) 17
-11 duration (specialty) (22+1 base) 6
-6 all enemies AOE

"Paradise"
Rank - S
Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu - Intelligence
Specialties: Negatives, Duration
CP: 20, 2 round cooldown
The truest vision of heaven through genjutsu, a special paradise that exists only within someones living heart. A truly perfect world whatever that would be, presented within the mind, each moment more perfect then the last, brooks spilling ambrosia, an unsettling delusion that is hard to break free of, lost love ones found, life seeming pointless with ones new found heaven. This genjutsu infiltrates and perverts the mind to being locked truly in a paradise of their own design, outwardly losing track of all life, even after the genjutsu is broken it persists in the users mind making them lose themselves to it, addictive longing to something that never was, the stuff of madness that is difficult to shake, one might even try to seek death to return to that heaven.
DF: Stun and -1d6+1d5+1 to rolls, for 2d6+3 rounds to all enemies
User loses: Next free action, and next turn.
DC: 30 Charisma to break
JP: 25 + 7 (no rank damage) +1 cool down +5 lose next turn

Role-Play Seems fine, fitting for an S-Rank.

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"Paradise"
Rank - S
Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu - Intelligence
Specialties: Negatives, Duration
CP: 20, 2 round cooldown
The truest vision of heaven through genjutsu, a special paradise that exists only within someones living heart. A truly perfect world whatever that would be, presented within the mind, each moment more perfect then the last, brooks spilling ambrosia, an unsettling delusion that is hard to break free of, lost love ones found, life seeming pointless with ones new found heaven. This genjutsu infiltrates and perverts the mind to being locked truly in a paradise of their own design, outwardly losing track of all life, even after the genjutsu is broken it persists in the users mind making them lose themselves to it, addictive longing to something that never was, the stuff of madness that is difficult to shake, one might even try to seek death to return to that heaven.
DF: Enemy AoE. Stun for X rounds and inflict -(1D10+2) universal attack/defense to rolls for X rounds.
User loses next turn.
DC: 30 Charisma to break
JP: 25 + 7 (no rank damage) +1 cool down +5 lose next turn
-7 stun 31
-18 universal negative rolls (specialty) 13
-6 all enemies AOE 7

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From here you can split up the duration of your effects between stun and negatives Losing your next turn means you lose your entire turn, including your free action. You have 7 JP.

...This is where we still are by the way.

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"Paradise"
Rank - S
Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu - Intelligence
Specialties: Negatives, Duration
CP: 20, 2 round cooldown
The truest vision of heaven through genjutsu, a special paradise that exists only within someones living heart. A truly perfect world whatever that would be, presented within the mind, each moment more perfect then the last, brooks spilling ambrosia, an unsettling delusion that is hard to break free of, lost love ones found, life seeming pointless with ones new found heaven. This genjutsu infiltrates and perverts the mind to being locked truly in a paradise of their own design, outwardly losing track of all life, even after the genjutsu is broken it persists in the users mind making them lose themselves to it, addictive longing to something that never was, the stuff of madness that is difficult to shake, one might even try to seek death to return to that heaven.
DF: Stun and -1d6+1d5+1 to rolls, for 2d6+3 rounds to all enemies
User loses: Next free action, and next turn.
DC: 30 Charisma to break

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JP: 25 + 7 (no rank damage) +1 cool down +5 lose next turn

38
Aoe-6
Stun-7
- to rolls -18  (6 points )   1d10+2
-Duration [ X]

7 jp left

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"Pirates Press Gang"
S - Rank
Type: Ninjutsu - Doujutsu - Wisdom
Specialties: Duration, Negatives, Bonus to Rolls
CP: 20
Yar! Shiver me timbers, ye be joining me crew right true! Yumi's grandfathers ultimate technique, by using this jutsu he and now Yumi, develop the ultimate power of press ganged piracy. Yumi's chosen allies are called, nay press ganged into piracy of a most audacious sort, fine semi-real illusory weapons, and garbs, combined with a mind made of rum, and a true to reality euphoric rush that may well become an addiction. This battle shifting effect is intense, enrapturing, and vicious, those effected become pirate minded in all the best ways, cheating, cutting throats, thinking things through  in new manners. Whatever the case may be they are made strong, pirate strong. Symptoms include: A serious case of the yarrs, a strong desire to defend their captain when she makes the call, scurvy, and mad loot.
DF: Free Action: 5 targets gain, +2d6 to rolls, for 1+2d4 rounds
Inverse Penalty: -3d10 defense to user for 1 round
The inverse penalty will last the entire jutsu for you. Do you want it still?

https://naruto-verse.forumotion.com/t6260-bin-me-yumi-jutsu-what-would-you-do-for-a-drunken-pirate-early-in-the-morning


Not how duration rules work sorry; due to that mechanism -^ Duration is for everything not just pick and choose your favorites

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~Put on hold ~